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EMERALD LAKE I believe you want to wade in clear blue water, But the Yukon presents a treetop view, Of a lovely lake, emerald son, not daughter. I was a traveler from the East Coast, one of few, Who freely strode a horse around this paradise - A two hour jaunt with my grinning spouse. And if i could do it again, i’d pay a greater price, Fly across this pioneer’s land, leave my sturdy house. Are their colorful fish hibernating from the Yukon’s cold, or dull - like pike or pink salmon? What does one beg in this intense and bold, blue and green lake of gold? I’d rather prance my high horse then search its dreg. Lovely sounds of nature, broken by growls of grizzly bears. Even the cliff’s crag, that shares its features - I am amused. Yukon spirit with pure mountain air lifts away personal cares. All of this paradise, sadly left, yet - into Alaska, we cruised. 5/16/2017 Brenda Chiri’s Mountaintop Lake Contest

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Date: 5/17/2017 3:07:00 PM
You go beyond technique and pour your heart into your work and the talent shines out for all to see and admire. Emile.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/17/2017 5:12:00 PM
Thank you, Emile! :)
Date: 5/16/2017 10:12:00 AM
beautifully written Kim. The flow and the rhymes are spot on. I really enjoyed this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2017 10:16:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!

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