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Emerald Eyes

Sparkle to opals do they lend shine to emeralds they offend exude the missive they can send glow despair they often mend burnish surpass and do not bend heal put right before the end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/9/2010 1:58:00 PM
great flow with your words here my friend.. and thanks for the nice comment
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Date: 6/8/2010 6:15:00 AM
This is wonderful. I like the rhyming scheme and how it moves the poem along. The title is consistent with the words. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/7/2010 2:33:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family Alan.. already your work has impressed me... keep going.. with -luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/7/2010 1:56:00 PM
Such beauty in your lines Alan and thankxxx for your special comments on my contest poem.. entering contests on Soup is a great way to have your poetry noticed and read by many more on site.. look on the contest page to enter one of your poem fitting the requirements... my birth stone is the emerald..so I am drawn to your words.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/7/2010 1:05:00 PM
enjoyed, ... p.d.
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