Embroidery of Vellum

EMBROIDERY OF VELLUM A clean poem composed Thee vellum virgin Lace betrothed in length Your satin train embraced Thee embroidery in apple gold Girdled in silver refined And curvature of silhouette Delicate with subtle design 6/25/2017 Lyric Poem A word fitly spoken is like apples of gold in baskets of silver proverbs 25:11 Bible ESV version
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Nusker Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 12:26 AM
Very creative and beautifully crafted. Congratulations!
Johnson Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 8:20 PM
Congrats on your placement.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Thanks, Curtis!
Callus Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Beautiful and creative, Kim...very poetic! Congratulations on this merited podium finish. Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 4:44 PM
Thanks so much, Paul!
Singh Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Congrats on your well served win, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Thanks, Sushma!
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 6:03 PM
Truly a beauty , Kim! Just love the imagery. Congrats on your win!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 7:11 PM
Thanks, Andrea! <3 Kim
Cozart Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Congrats, Kim. Beautiful poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 7:11 PM
Thanks, Dale!
Roper Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 5:47 PM
Great imagery you have created in this verse, Kim, congratulations on your win ~*
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 5:52 PM
Thanks so much, Eve!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 11:47 AM
This is some of the best creative poetic tapestry I've read thus far on PSoup, Kim. It is such a beautiful theme and lyrical presentation. It sings to the heart w/grace and charm. You're such a talented poetess ... your golden pen blends so well w/the golden apples. Love always, dear.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 1:38 PM
Thanks so much, my friend! :)
Cozart Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 4:43 PM
Gorgeous.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 5:24 PM
Thanks, Dale!
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