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Embroidery of Vellum

EMBROIDERY OF VELLUM A clean poem composed Thee vellum virgin Lace betrothed in length Your satin train embraced Thee embroidery in apple gold Girdled in silver refined And curvature of silhouette Delicate with subtle design 6/25/2017 Lyric Poem A word fitly spoken is like apples of gold in baskets of silver proverbs 25:11 Bible ESV version

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Date: 7/20/2017 12:26:00 AM
Very creative and beautifully crafted. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/17/2017 8:20:00 PM
Congrats on your placement.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2017 9:14:00 PM
Thanks, Curtis!
Date: 7/17/2017 4:38:00 PM
Beautiful and creative, Kim...very poetic! Congratulations on this merited podium finish. Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2017 4:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paul!
Date: 7/17/2017 8:34:00 AM
Congrats on your well served win, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2017 9:30:00 AM
Thanks, Sushma!
Date: 7/16/2017 6:03:00 PM
Truly a beauty , Kim! Just love the imagery. Congrats on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2017 7:11:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! <3 Kim
Date: 7/16/2017 5:54:00 PM
Congrats, Kim. Beautiful poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2017 7:11:00 PM
Thanks, Dale!
Date: 7/16/2017 5:47:00 PM
Great imagery you have created in this verse, Kim, congratulations on your win ~*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2017 5:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve!
Date: 6/26/2017 11:47:00 AM
This is some of the best creative poetic tapestry I've read thus far on PSoup, Kim. It is such a beautiful theme and lyrical presentation. It sings to the heart w/grace and charm. You're such a talented poetess ... your golden pen blends so well w/the golden apples. Love always, dear.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2017 1:38:00 PM
Thanks so much, my friend! :)
Date: 6/25/2017 4:43:00 PM
Gorgeous.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2017 5:24:00 PM
Thanks, Dale!

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