Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Embracing Life

by Michael J Falotico
                                                          I stood alone in the field..
                                             The sunglasses and a smile were my shield..
                                                  I walked, ran and crawled for peace..
                                            I loved ,desired and screamed from my feet..
                                                  With both lips I blew kisses in the air..
                                           All but a few scattered as the rest fell with care..
                                              I left no stones unturned but never rushed..
                                                 I just tickled rainbows till they blushed..
                                             While I embraced life with an intimate glare..
                                              Making love to new and old with equal flare..

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Lee Ramage August 27, 2011 at 7:50 PM Congratulations on the poem, well done. I don't claim to be a great poet but this feels very sensual to me, was it suppose to be? Lee Michael J. Falotico August 28, 2011 at 12:09 PM A little bit Lee...

Jun-Jun Villanueva August 27, 2011 at 4:32 AM really deserving~~~CONGRATULATIONS~~~this is a great one~~smile for the win~~*-*junjun

Sara Kendrick August 26, 2011 at 10:28 AM Congrats on your win in Brian's great contest..Sara

Wilma Neels August 26, 2011 at 8:00 AM Enjoyed reading this one again Michael, stunning last line!! Congratulations on your awesome win, love WNN

Nancy Jones August 26, 2011 at 1:52 AM standing alone making love equally... dig the concept, dig the write, happy congrats to you, MJF!

Tim B August 25, 2011 at 10:03 PM I remember reading this one Michael, it always had winner written all over it, beautiful poem and congrats on your awesome win.

Debbie Guzzi August 25, 2011 at 8:59 PM sounds just like YOU! Congrad's on your win! light & love

Jack Horne August 25, 2011 at 5:07 PM Many congrats to you, Michael : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 25, 2011 at 3:14 PM Congrats Michael on your first place win with this wonderful write for Brian's contest.. outstanding as always my W.K. as your Jersey Girl is in umbrella mode... lot of rain.. from hurricane ...

Carol Sunshine Brown August 25, 2011 at 2:29 PM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "A Jewel In Your Crown" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan August 25, 2011 at 1:43 PM Congratulations on your win! this has a great flow and I love "tickled rainbows till they blushed" i feel carefree just reading this :P

Nette Onclaud August 25, 2011 at 12:25 PM engrossing... happy thumbs up to you for your TOP stunning win! :) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 8, 2011 at 5:30 PM well luv I never want u out of my life and happy to know u are not scared away in any way ... the 'bear' is now 'bigfoot' .. a bust weekend with his temper and for me it is finished ..once we come back from this preplanned vacation already paid for.. I told him.. enough.. he was upset and ranting and drove away Sunday afternoon like a maniac cause I would not be intimate with him...how could I? the bellowing is like a beast in a cage.. he needs to see a doctor..really luv.. but I am super..

Dinda Minardi July 24, 2011 at 9:22 AM This is very entertaining and sweet, Michael :)

Kevin Clark July 23, 2011 at 9:25 PM I like this rhyme. Very well written. I just tickled rainbows till they blushed is a great line

John Freeman July 21, 2011 at 5:43 AM Life must eventually be embraced by all Michael. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels July 21, 2011 at 4:25 AM Gosh, I love it especially your end line Michael.. it made me smile :) lfde Wilma

Poet Destroyer A July 20, 2011 at 8:13 PM I am going to wait patiently for you to enter my latest contest... by the way your poetry composes great feelings.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 20, 2011 at 6:52 PM am embracing your words Michael as my comfort zone now.... hope u don't mind luv... reading your poetry gives me strength and sustenance always... appreciate the many sweet comments and uplifting sentiments ... will cherish them forever .. J.G. in poetry mode...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 20, 2011 at 3:02 PM well I surely luv that last line Michael.. and the vision u extended to us readers of your terrific words my W.K. ... those kissess reach far and do well to those who catch them luv.. an enjoyable delightful piece... appreciate your words on Beautiful Beach.. it is my hideaway now.. if u could read my Baseball Mania....I have a line about a line and drive ball..is that correct luv? thankxx form a bronzed J.G. in Summer mode ..always with luv..

Tim B July 20, 2011 at 2:50 PM Wrapped up the title and expressed it in a nice compact poem, very well written and an inspirational message as well, thank you.