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Embrace and Release

You are invisible I never see you in my dreams. You are invisible And yet I feel you all around, it seems The waiting is forever And yet I want you, Oh how I want you In my sleeping mind How can love be so unkind To show me Who you were And now, You are invisible.

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John Gondolf

Date: 8/9/2021 3:01:00 AM

Love is like an elusive butterfly, very hard to capture. Nice written, Janine.

Phillis Lovefred

Date: 5/11/2021 10:28:00 AM

oh yes janine i know What it is liek to miss a lover! My old boyfriend was a veteran in the world war 2, but he unfortunatey was killed when the war was over. I miss him so very much. I still have his old uniform today...... if only it didn't have this weird buddhist symbol on it that i don't know what it means. Thanks for sharing -Hasel!

Janine Lever
Date: 5/13/2021 6:24:00 AM

Hello Phillis, thank you for your comments. I could relate to your story of your pain, what is the weird buddhist symbol on the uniform? have you tried to find out? He may have been a gurkha which was a very special regiment. love and peace janine