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For the contest sponcered by Unseeking Seeker

 

Line of inquiry: truth imbibed awaits assimilation we feel it in our bones in time dissolved meditation The soul of the area around from the shadows that stretch long. Sings a wishful from the ground when it sings a melodious song. The light coming from the shadows brightening the area around the bend. It makes visible in the light of glows, then the soul of that earth sings and glows. The light shines on the tree limbs, and on the trunk from which they grow. The light touches the ground on the bend, is something that is anything but pretend. The light though soft and honest hangs from its home from above. Brings the area a solid promise, as it feels the surrounding air with love.

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Date: 2/1/2025 4:40:00 PM
Creative way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for sharing. Soupmail soon.
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Date: 1/31/2025 3:23:00 PM
Wow. You did so well with the prompt. I hope you get a win.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 1/31/2025 4:21:00 PM
Thanks. So far this is his only contest I have ever entered because his prompts are just difficult IMHO.
Date: 1/22/2025 7:30:00 AM
Nice poem...long shadows mean a low sun
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 1/22/2025 7:43:00 AM
You are right because shadows grow in the evening. I will look at adjusting the words accordingly. Thanks for telling me something I should have thought about.
Date: 1/22/2025 7:29:00 AM
Love your poem Miranda wish you well in the contest. xx
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 1/22/2025 7:44:00 AM
Thanks for the well wish in the contest.

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