Doris Culverhouse Poet Narrative

Embellish My Day

Embellish My Day

Embellish my day into a full life worthy to be lived in your presence. 
Erase my nonchalance and hubristic thoughts before the fiery declivity
consumes this life and body. The bird's song is gibberish in my thoughts; 
matching my heart and life. Seeing a happy family reminds me of my sadness.
Dry tears sting my eyes and laughter is removed far from my being. 
Renew and enhance my spirit. Mold me for your purposes.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich September 1, 2010 at 9:30 PM Like a lovely prayer, Doris. Congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 27, 2010 at 7:17 PM Congrats on the win, Doris

Gert W. Knop August 25, 2010 at 8:28 AM Ma congrats on your win with this emotional poem, Doris! Thank yo also for your kind comments!....Gert

Sharon Tideswell August 25, 2010 at 5:18 AM Congratulations on your win with this heartfelt poem Doris. Very well wriiten ~ Sharon :)

Connie Marcum Wong August 24, 2010 at 8:53 PM Doris, Congratulations on your 5th place win in this contest. Enjoy your honor! Blessings, Connie

Debbie Guzzi August 24, 2010 at 5:18 PM sigh....HUGS! congrad's Light & Love

Doris Culverhouse August 24, 2010 at 5:50 AM Fifth place win in the anything goes contest.

Ralph Taylor August 24, 2010 at 5:42 AM Congrats, Doris. Nice going. Have a super week. xxx Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown August 24, 2010 at 5:05 AM Congratulations Doris on your poetry winning in Paula Swanson's contest "Poetry For Poetry's Sake". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts August 23, 2010 at 9:22 PM wonderful, congrats on your win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 23, 2010 at 8:54 PM Congrats Doris on your big win in Paula's contest with this rare beauty... enjoyed a special poem tonight..with luv.. ciao..

Dr.Ram Mehta August 23, 2010 at 8:13 PM Congrats on the win, Doris

Carolyn Devonshire August 23, 2010 at 8:11 PM Your poem reads like a wonderful prayer, Doris. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 23, 2010 at 1:21 PM Wow Doris another rare beauty from u my friend.. the words used are magnificent and are a blessing to me.. enjoyed this piece luv..ciao..

Sheol Moribund August 23, 2010 at 12:16 PM Hello Doris: A great poem!!! Thanks again 4 taking the time 2 read and comment on my poetry. Yours truly: Sheol

Kevin Semeniuk August 23, 2010 at 11:46 AM wonderful strong poem!

Poet Destroyer A August 23, 2010 at 9:48 AM well done DORIS, enjoyed! just stoping by to say hi!,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 23, 2010 at 8:01 AM I enjoyed Embellish My Day

Ravindra K Kapoor August 23, 2010 at 7:58 AM Very touching and moving Poem and a sad prayer for love and peace of God. I really like the beginning ' Embellish my day'. Beautiful write my friend. And many thanks for your good wishes on my contest Poem. Just keep your Hopes alive. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra........Doris Culverhouse. Note: Please check the entire poem is in single line.

Francine Roberts August 23, 2010 at 7:43 AM lovely sentiments