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Embellish My Day

Embellish My Day Embellish my day into a full life worthy to be lived in your presence. Erase my nonchalance and hubristic thoughts before the fiery declivity consumes this life and body. The bird's song is gibberish in my thoughts; matching my heart and life. Seeing a happy family reminds me of my sadness. Dry tears sting my eyes and laughter is removed far from my being. Renew and enhance my spirit. Mold me for your purposes.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2010 9:30:00 PM

Like a lovely prayer, Doris. Congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2010 7:17:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Doris

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/25/2010 8:28:00 AM

Ma congrats on your win with this emotional poem, Doris! Thank yo also for your kind comments!....Gert

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/25/2010 5:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this heartfelt poem Doris. Very well wriiten ~ Sharon :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/24/2010 8:53:00 PM

Doris, Congratulations on your 5th place win in this contest. Enjoy your honor! Blessings, Connie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/24/2010 5:18:00 PM

sigh....HUGS! congrad's Light & Love

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/24/2010 5:50:00 AM

Fifth place win in the anything goes contest.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/24/2010 5:42:00 AM

Congrats, Doris. Nice going. Have a super week. xxx Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/24/2010 5:05:00 AM

Congratulations Doris on your poetry winning in Paula Swanson's contest "Poetry For Poetry's Sake". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/23/2010 9:22:00 PM

wonderful, congrats on your win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/23/2010 8:54:00 PM

Congrats Doris on your big win in Paula's contest with this rare beauty... enjoyed a special poem tonight..with luv.. ciao..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/23/2010 8:13:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Doris

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/23/2010 8:11:00 PM

Your poem reads like a wonderful prayer, Doris. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/23/2010 1:21:00 PM

Wow Doris another rare beauty from u my friend.. the words used are magnificent and are a blessing to me.. enjoyed this piece luv..ciao..

Sheol Moribund

Date: 8/23/2010 12:16:00 PM

Hello Doris: A great poem!!! Thanks again 4 taking the time 2 read and comment on my poetry. Yours truly: Sheol

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 8/23/2010 11:46:00 AM

wonderful strong poem!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/23/2010 9:48:00 AM

well done DORIS, enjoyed! just stoping by to say hi!,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/23/2010 8:01:00 AM

I enjoyed Embellish My Day

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/23/2010 7:58:00 AM

Very touching and moving Poem and a sad prayer for love and peace of God. I really like the beginning ' Embellish my day'. Beautiful write my friend. And many thanks for your good wishes on my contest Poem. Just keep your Hopes alive. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra........Doris Culverhouse. Note: Please check the entire poem is in single line.

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/23/2010 7:43:00 AM

lovely sentiments