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Embellish My Day

Embellish My Day

Embellish my day into a full life worthy to be lived in your presence. 
Erase my nonchalance and hubristic thoughts before the fiery declivity
consumes this life and body. The bird's song is gibberish in my thoughts; 
matching my heart and life. Seeing a happy family reminds me of my sadness.
Dry tears sting my eyes and laughter is removed far from my being. 
Renew and enhance my spirit. Mold me for your purposes.

Copyright © Doris Culverhouse | Year Posted 2010

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/1/2010 9:30:00 PM Like a lovely prayer, Doris. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/27/2010 7:17:00 PM Congrats on the win, Doris Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 8/25/2010 8:28:00 AM Ma congrats on your win with this emotional poem, Doris! Thank yo also for your kind comments!....Gert Login to Reply

Sharon Tideswell Date: 8/25/2010 5:18:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this heartfelt poem Doris. Very well wriiten ~ Sharon :) Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/24/2010 8:53:00 PM Doris, Congratulations on your 5th place win in this contest. Enjoy your honor! Blessings, Connie Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/24/2010 5:18:00 PM sigh....HUGS! congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 8/24/2010 5:50:00 AM Fifth place win in the anything goes contest. Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 8/24/2010 5:42:00 AM Congrats, Doris. Nice going. Have a super week. xxx Ralph Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/24/2010 5:05:00 AM Congratulations Doris on your poetry winning in Paula Swanson's contest "Poetry For Poetry's Sake". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 8/23/2010 9:22:00 PM wonderful, congrats on your win Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/23/2010 8:54:00 PM Congrats Doris on your big win in Paula's contest with this rare beauty... enjoyed a special poem tonight..with luv.. ciao.. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/23/2010 8:13:00 PM Congrats on the win, Doris Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/23/2010 8:11:00 PM Your poem reads like a wonderful prayer, Doris. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/23/2010 1:21:00 PM Wow Doris another rare beauty from u my friend.. the words used are magnificent and are a blessing to me.. enjoyed this piece luv..ciao.. Login to Reply

Sheol Moribund Date: 8/23/2010 12:16:00 PM Hello Doris: A great poem!!! Thanks again 4 taking the time 2 read and comment on my poetry. Yours truly: Sheol Login to Reply

Kevin Semeniuk Date: 8/23/2010 11:46:00 AM wonderful strong poem! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/23/2010 9:48:00 AM well done DORIS, enjoyed! just stoping by to say hi!,..p.d. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/23/2010 8:01:00 AM I enjoyed Embellish My Day Login to Reply

Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 8/23/2010 7:58:00 AM Very touching and moving Poem and a sad prayer for love and peace of God. I really like the beginning ' Embellish my day'. Beautiful write my friend. And many thanks for your good wishes on my contest Poem. Just keep your Hopes alive. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra........Doris Culverhouse. Note: Please check the entire poem is in single line. Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 8/23/2010 7:43:00 AM lovely sentiments Login to Reply