Eloquent Banter

From the slide of hand and teeth chatter,  
my eyes, don’t expand with me madder. 
Cause she’s aware of the emphasis, 
so despair isn’t imminent, 
when she’s prepared to dissect me in increments, 
but my nose doesn’t flare, it’s interesting, innocence, 
when ping ponging ignorance 
is shared with smiles and strawberry licorice.  












2/04/18                 'Eloquent banter; You tease me so nicely' contest 
                             Sponsored by: Edward McCall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 9:42 PM
Congratulations on your win, Normie ! Great poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Payton Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Thank you, that was sweet of you, Eve.
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Congrats on your win, Normie. Lovely poem.
Payton Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Thank you, Line Gauthier. Thank you for reading it.
Mccall Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Hi Normie, This poem is definitely a fun read. And the line; It's interesting, innocence, when ping ponging ignorance is shared with smiles and strawberry licorice. That is such a cool line congrats on your win.
Payton Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 9:07 PM
Thanks, Edward. That was cool of you to say.
One Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Nice one Normie...
Payton Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 9:07 PM
Appreciate it, Silent One.
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