Eloping

Please, give me your hand, my dear

Trust me, we'll descend each rung together,

Worry not of the daylight

Rather, it’s your father we should fear.


(Poem is based on picture of an empty bedroom 
with an open window looking into an early morning sky).
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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January 12, 2017 at 6:12 PM
I like it ... a LOT! Good luck in the contest.
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