Ellip Who

#1

I sustain 
sweet smile
how bout you?

 
#2 

mundane night
in the dark
my desk light


Ellip Contest
3-3-13

adventurehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

December 11, 2013 at 2:32 AM

sweet stopping by a second and third time.......saying hi,,,,........where IZ U???? .... xoxoxoxoxoox ;-)

Timothy Hicks

March 22, 2013 at 12:09 AM

Very interesting haiku work (the second was my favorite... even if rhymes feel somewhat strange in haiku). I haven't heard about the contest, but the "night owl" in me appreciates me the thoughts that went into writing this. Cool poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 14, 2013 at 2:58 AM

Like this haiku! - Well done! - (We think so well after nightfall, let your light burn.) - Luck in contest!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

March 13, 2013 at 4:47 PM

Ok believe me I know what you are saying here a late night trying to write. and you just can't sleep right until you finish. good right it reminds to pick up a new light bulb my went out.

Len Gasun

March 13, 2013 at 8:32 AM

Hello my dear friend and libramate! I'm so glad to read this amazing poem of yours. i love it so much and the form. Thank you so much for sharing again your gem! Thank you also for my awesome placement again in your contest. I'm greatly honored! Thank you so much! Have a great day! love and big hugs, Leonora