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Ellip Who

#1

I sustain 
sweet smile
how bout you?

 
#2 

mundane night
in the dark
my desk light


Ellip Contest
3-3-13



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Date: 12/11/2013 2:32:00 AM
sweet stopping by a second and third time.......saying hi,,,,........where IZ U???? .... xoxoxoxoxoox ;-)
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Date: 3/22/2013 12:09:00 AM
Very interesting haiku work (the second was my favorite... even if rhymes feel somewhat strange in haiku). I haven't heard about the contest, but the "night owl" in me appreciates me the thoughts that went into writing this. Cool poem!
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Date: 3/14/2013 2:58:00 AM
Like this haiku! - Well done! - (We think so well after nightfall, let your light burn.) - Luck in contest!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/13/2013 4:47:00 PM
Ok believe me I know what you are saying here a late night trying to write. and you just can't sleep right until you finish. good right it reminds to pick up a new light bulb my went out.
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Date: 3/13/2013 8:32:00 AM
Hello my dear friend and libramate! I'm so glad to read this amazing poem of yours. i love it so much and the form. Thank you so much for sharing again your gem! Thank you also for my awesome placement again in your contest. I'm greatly honored! Thank you so much! Have a great day! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/7/2013 11:02:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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Date: 3/7/2013 3:26:00 AM
M-n-M ha I love this, good luck...David
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Date: 3/4/2013 9:10:00 PM
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Date: 3/3/2013 1:32:00 PM
SandyIvy, just great good luck...David
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