Elle Lee and Bumble Bee - Nursery Rhyme

There was a lovely child named Elle Lee
whose very best friend was a bumblebee.
They met one day in a field of clover
Bumble Bee buzzed and flew right over.

He was surprised to see Elle Lee's wings.
She said, "Faeries have wonderful things."
But Elle Lee didn't like her curly red hair
and covered it up so no one would stare.

Bumble Bee said, "Your curls are divine.
the same color as strawberries on a vine."
She took off her scarf and set her curls free
Shouting happily, "WHOOPEE!  WHOOPEE!"



March 24, 2021
Nursery Rhyme 3 Contest
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Allison Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:14 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win Jenna this is so adorable:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:27 PM
Aww thanks, Jan.
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 12:19 PM
- A really sweet poems for children ... imagine being best friends with a bumblebee ... - Congratulations on your win, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:27 PM
That I hold be fun. Thanks, Anne-Lise.
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April 6, 2021 at 10:46 AM
Jenna, congrats on your 1st place win with your adorable poem! Blessings, Kim M
Logan Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Thanks, Kim.
Y. Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 10:21 PM
Hi Jenna, I really enjoyed your “nursery rhyme”poem. Good message as well.Congratulations on your first place win. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
Logan Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 10:26 AM
Thanks a whole bunch, Alexis.
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April 5, 2021 at 10:09 PM
Jenna, great rhythm in this great nursery rhyme. Congratulations on your win. . Please join me at my blog Nursery Rhyme 3 Contest - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
Logan Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 10:26 AM
Thanks for including me on your list of winners, Eve.
Koplin Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 9:56 AM
This is an absolute amazing write! “Strawberries on a vine” how beautiful and descriptive. Well done!!
Logan Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Oh, thanks very much, Mark.
Daniel Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 4:54 AM
An awesome delight, Jenna:) I agree with Tom:)
Logan Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 11:52 AM
Thanks so much, Jo.
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 12:13 PM
This is an absolute delight to read Jenna and i love the name you have chosen 'Elle lee' is so cute:-) hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 12:33 PM
These are such fun to write, Jan! I thought you might like the chosen name. Thanks for finding it so delightful.
Cunningham Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 9:18 AM
You write these so well Jenna, you should write a book of them. Tom
Logan Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 12:32 PM
You guys are two of my biggest cheer leaders! Thank you, thank you!
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 12:11 PM
hear hear Jenna's poetry is amazing Tom!:-) She is such a gifted young lady:-) hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. That's a thought!
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