Elk Walk - the Rancher

Elk Walk

           elk walk in snow to
     find a morsel in warm fount
         beyond, fields beacons


                The Rancher

          morning frost twinkles
      while rancher sips coffee and
            whiffs new arrivals


                   5/9/2014
          January Haiku Contest
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Khan Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 11:49 PM
Congratulations :)
A   Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 5:48 PM
Congratulations, Linda
Callus Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 2:08 PM
I love both haiku, Lisa! perhaps the second tips the scales! Congrats on your win. // paul
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 10:46 AM
how cool the way you showed animals and then rancher in the other one. Congrats for your win. This could be Montana or something.
Mehta Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 9:46 AM
Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Lisa
A  Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 8:37 AM
LISA, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Warmth in the cold, a good contrast!
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