Elizabeth

wet pillow teardrops missing moon glow delight sans tomorrow

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/9/2024 3:23:00 PM

Arlo...ahh sad. The shortness of form allows me empathize with all kinds of emotion. Wondering what happened. Smiles!!

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/9/2024 11:48:00 PM

This sadness has been revisited innumerable times, Duke. Thx 4 comment. :o))

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/7/2024 6:32:00 PM

I enjoyed the melancholic mood of your senryu, arlo...good job!

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/9/2024 2:36:00 PM

Thanks for the visit, NO. :o))

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/7/2024 12:09:00 PM

Your feelings are so well expressed in this write, Arlo! I loved that line: “ missing moonglow delight “ Pangie

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/7/2024 3:59:00 PM

Yes, I am your friend and Thank you… Pangie

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/7/2024 3:57:00 PM

Thank you, Friend. :-))

Tom Woody

Date: 9/7/2024 6:01:00 AM

Real or fiction? Either way the sense of missing is palpable

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/7/2024 11:20:00 AM

Everybody has this memory, TW. :o))