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Elixirs of Eternal Breath

Wouldn't it be exquisite to write the way Monet lavishly painted masterpieces, or Beethoven composed profoundly simpatico symphonies, graciously script epic sentiments as utterly stunning as Neruda's elixirs of enchanting poetry ~ Sell my soul for all eternity to exhale infinite breaths amidst such indubitably undying creations

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Date: 11/8/2016 9:39:00 PM
soulspeak, unending immeasurable breaths. shall we laugh at mortality and count ourselves unending? or shall we place periods to punctuate our gasps and die in our self-creation? I sense you have escaped — there are no periods at the end of your poems ... allows the reader to resume the ride without feeling left out of your thoughts ... undying creation?
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Date: 10/9/2016 10:12:00 AM
A gorgeous write!
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Paloma P
Date: 10/9/2016 10:23:00 AM
Many thanks for your attentive responses! You made my day. :)

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