Elixir

Send me elixir back and bless me with the rain
The fruits of the sacred tree and the ointments of pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 8:23 AM
I don't want the pain but I have my share of it. Enjoyed reading your winner. Congrats. Sara
Khan Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 12:21 AM
Thank you so much dear.sara
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 8:13 AM
lovely ~ congrats
Khan Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 12:21 AM
Thanks alot dear
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 11:10 AM
I echo Kim: Wonderful (and congrats)
Khan Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 1:46 AM
Thanks alot dear
Rodrigues Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Wonderful! Congrats!
Khan Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 1:47 AM
Thanks alot dear
Sambourne Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 8:00 AM
Exceptional write! Congratulations. All the best, Brian
Khan Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Thank you so much
Alex Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 6:38 AM
Has Shakespearean touch. Congratulations on your win!
Khan Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Thanks alot
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