Eliot- Joie De Vivre

What tune does youth most play
when future's biding ?
                               Today !
What wisdom does age convey
when time is passing ?
                                Today !

An eliot is an epigram form I labelled in honour of George Eliot the English novelist/poet, 
inspired by an example in Chap 8 of her book Daniel Deronda.Here is her epigram should you 
wish to try one for yourself

What name doth Joy most borrow
when life is fair ?
                          Tomorrow !
What name does best fit sorrow
In young despair?
                           Tomorrow !
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Shango Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 1:34 PM
A man who is giver will always give ... and your genius is a treasure house of gifts. This gift is totally enjoyable. Thanks for the honor you recently bestowed upon me. I am humbled in your light.
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 9:15 PM
I see you like forms too then! THis was a clever epigram you posted. thanks for reading my poetry. andrea
Kendrick Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 4:26 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Educational and enlighting. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Guzzi Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 1:37 PM
contemplative! Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 4:36 AM
I do so like this type of poetry... enhances the entire meaning.. adds flavor to the reader's mind... such a brilliant way to express... thankxxxx again Brian for education plus on this rainy Saturday in New Jersey ... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
Moreno Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 2:58 AM
An amazing structure. Your keen eyes never fail to discover greatness. Great work...Raul
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