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Eleven Hours

Eleven hours you waited
To get you some meds
Now you are dying
In this hospital bed

You squeezed my finger tight
You twist and turn your head
You moaned in pain
Just before you were dead

Your lungs start to struggle
You couldn’t fight anymore
Your little heart stopped
I collapsed to the floor

They brought you back
Said you weren’t dead
Your heart restarted
But oh, your cold little head

We said our goodbyes
We gave you our love
Were you there watching
From way up above

It didn’t have to happen
My heart went with you
It could have been changed
I am broken in two

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