Elevated

Raise me higher 'til I'm inside Her,
To be exposed and proven a Liar
If ruled a Fool, so then build the Pyre
Record my words then set me on fire!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 21, 2013 at 5:26 PM
Chan The Man This is a strong and deep write. Very thought provoking and meaningful. You have a way of making words powerful and emotional. Hugs Thanks for the great comment on my Closed Doors poem.
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November 22, 2013 at 5:06 AM
Thanks for being the first to review this piece, Robin! I really do appreciate the kind words <3 :)
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