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Raise me higher 'til I'm inside Her, To be exposed and proven a Liar If ruled a Fool, so then build the Pyre Record my words then set me on fire!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/21/2013 5:26:00 PM
Chan The Man This is a strong and deep write. Very thought provoking and meaningful. You have a way of making words powerful and emotional. Hugs Thanks for the great comment on my Closed Doors poem.
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Date: 11/22/2013 5:06:00 AM
Thanks for being the first to review this piece, Robin! I really do appreciate the kind words <3 :)

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