Eletric Aurora

September Challenge - Tritina 9-24-26
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Electric Aurora

Neon ribbons flame across an onyx midnight
When electric flares and fires flash in jewel tones
Pale crystal snows reflect Aurora’s gossamer gown.

Swirling arcs decorate the hemline of her gown
As solar sequins flash across the midnight
And currents of her ruby fire play in arctic tones.

Arctic sprite pulses in bursting topaz solar tones
Queen of astral mischief wears an emerald gown
Sneaking out to play in the sapphire midnight.

In gowns of emerald, playful minx winks at midnight in turquoise tones.
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Cunningham Avatar
September 25, 2026 at 10:39 AM
Your imagery and use of metaphors are on another level Sam. Good luck in the contest and have a lovely weekend. Over Fork Over. Tom🌹 PS Soup mail.
Sharma  Avatar
September 25, 2026 at 4:04 AM
Oh my! This is so celestially GORGEOUS my dear Sam! 😍🌊💙✨ I'm swooning over the galactic metaphors that you've smeared across the canvas of cosmos, the heavenly gown and her twirls with the stars gawshhhh m meltinnnnn absolutely resplendent.. and unique in every way absolutely enriched with poetic creativity and soulful artistry , "Neon ribbons flame across an onyx midnight When electric flares and fires flash in jewel tones" Those opening lines just lured my poetic heart Loved reading ~ keep shininnn and writinnn sending you warmth n fairy starsz 🧚🌙🍂💫✨
Daniel Avatar
September 25, 2026 at 12:24 AM
Such lovely imagery, Sam, very beautifully composed😊
Valles Avatar
September 24, 2026 at 6:55 PM
There you go again, Sam... writing at a level I will never achieve. 😊 Magnificent piece! You worked in the revolving end words masterfully! Great Tritina!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2026 at 5:52 PM
Combo of metaphoric gown and lovely imagery make this poem work! Loved: playful minx winks at midnight…❤️
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