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elephant's echo hiku

For Brian Strand's 1392 Poetry Contest 22 June 2025 _.-- ,.--. , , .' .' / She walks through silence, | @ |'..---------------._ / \._/ '. / .-.- \ memory carved into dust— ( / \ \ \\ '. | # \\ \ -. / :\ | )._____ .' \ " | / \ | \ ) time follows her path. | |. /' :__ \ . - ' '--' Contest Judged:  6/25/2025 2:34:00 PM 1st Place

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Date: 6/25/2025 10:04:00 PM
Oh, wow!!! What a shape hiku!!! Impressive! Congratulations bro. Bernard. Stay uniquely creative!^__^JCB
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Date: 6/25/2025 8:35:00 PM
Superb ! She is my main totem animal. ThkU 4 offering.
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