Bernardo F. Asuncion Poet Haiku

elephant's echo hiku

For Brian Strand's 1392 Poetry Contest

22 June 2025


       _.-- ,.--. , ,
     .'     .'        /    She walks through silence,
     | @        |'..---------------._
    /      \._/                         '.
   /  .-.-                                 \  memory carved into dust—
  (  /    \                                 \
  \\      '.                              | #
   \\       \   -.                     /
    :\       |     )._____ .'        \
       "     |   /  \    |    \           )  time follows her path.
             |   |. /'      :__ \ . -  '
             '--'


Contest Judged:  6/25/2025 2:34:00 PM 
1st Place

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JC Brul June 25, 2025 at 10:04 PM Oh, wow!!! What a shape hiku!!! Impressive! Congratulations bro. Bernard. Stay uniquely creative!^__^JCB

Ghairo Daniels June 25, 2025 at 8:35 PM Superb ! She is my main totem animal. ThkU 4 offering.