Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Elephant With Tusk

elephant with tusk
                                            salutes all by dancing head
                                                   rider thinks his fun

                                                  Many from buildings
                                            others from running buses
                                                  enjoys the moment

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 5, 2012 at 11:43 AM I am so happy to have time to read some wonderful poetry today. Glad yours was one of the pieces I was able to read BL. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol Bl Devnath September 5, 2012 at 12:08 PM Thanks a lot because i am inspired. Loved always, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 5, 2012 at 5:47 AM a powerful creature and a powerful poem bl extolling the beauty and aura of this magnificent animal..we can only see them in a zoo .. so wrong to enclose this glorious specimen of God .. an excellent tribute luv .. Bl Devnath September 5, 2012 at 9:27 AM Thanks for this piece of wonderful comment, I am inspired a lot. Loved always, bl

Kenisha Shines September 5, 2012 at 12:51 AM nice write Bl Devnath September 5, 2012 at 9:25 AM You are nice too. Thanks, loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick September 4, 2012 at 4:35 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work..Elephants under control are a beautiful animal..Great topic that you chose on which to create a poem..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Bl Devnath September 5, 2012 at 9:24 AM Thanks for your review and for your nice comment, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A September 4, 2012 at 4:22 PM Bl, I like elephants, and the way they ride with the crowd... great poem, enjoyed stopping by today, always~PD Bl Devnath September 5, 2012 at 9:23 AM It's my pleasure that you comment nicely always. You are beautiful and nice both I feel from your poem. Loved always, bl

James Marshall Goff September 4, 2012 at 1:46 PM imaginative, original! jimbo Bl Devnath September 5, 2012 at 9:19 AM Hi! Jimbo, how are you? Loved your nice comment. Always, bl