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Elephant With Tusk

elephant with tusk
                                            salutes all by dancing head
                                                   rider thinks his fun

                                                  Many from buildings
                                            others from running buses
                                                  enjoys the moment

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 11:43:00 AM

I am so happy to have time to read some wonderful poetry today. Glad yours was one of the pieces I was able to read BL. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/5/2012 12:08:00 PM

Thanks a lot because i am inspired. Loved always, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2012 5:47:00 AM

a powerful creature and a powerful poem bl extolling the beauty and aura of this magnificent animal..we can only see them in a zoo .. so wrong to enclose this glorious specimen of God .. an excellent tribute luv ..

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/5/2012 9:27:00 AM

Thanks for this piece of wonderful comment, I am inspired a lot. Loved always, bl

Kenisha Shines

Date: 9/5/2012 12:51:00 AM

nice write

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/5/2012 9:25:00 AM

You are nice too. Thanks, loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/4/2012 4:35:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..Elephants under control are a beautiful animal..Great topic that you chose on which to create a poem..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/5/2012 9:24:00 AM

Thanks for your review and for your nice comment, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl