Notes About The Poem

Elephant

Enormous gentle beast
Equals man's compassion.
Each has powerful strength,
Ears that have massive size.
Elongated nose helps
Enrich all its senses.
Earth's largest animal.

9-18-16
Pleiades E Poetry Contest
Sponsor Kim Merryman

Note:
Compassion and Altruism:
Compassion is not reserved for offspring alone in elephant society. Elephants appear to make allowances for other members of their herd. Observers noted that one African herd always traveled slowly because one of its members had never recovered from a broken leg. And in another case, a park warden reported a herd that traveled slowly because one female was carrying around a dead calf. 

One perplexing report was of an adult elephant making repeated attempt to help a baby rhinoceros stuck in the mud. She continued to try to save the baby rhino despite the fact that its mother charged her each time. Risking her life for the sake of an animal that is not her own, not related to her, or even her own species is remarkably altruistic in nature.

While there is a great deal more to learn about what elephants feel, such accounts are astonishing. They reveal a creature that is compassionate, weeps, revels, rages and grieves. They lead us to believe that the depth of elephant emotional capacity knows no limit. They are striking for they suggest that elephants act on feelings and not solely for survival. They are highly intelligent creatures. They are the largest land animal.
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Michaels Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 5:03 AM
Great Pleiades, Connie. You honour the pachyderms in style! Regards, John.
Marie Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 2:03 AM
Lovely and informative I am fascinated with the human like emotions of love, grief and protective nature of these misunderstood magnificent animals. Your notes are amazing and a great learning experience :-) I was so glad that the last big circus will end using animals this year. I would love to go to the elephant refuge in Tennessee where many elephants live out their days after years of abuse. Excellent writing Connie and the pic. of baby elephant's ears flying is sooo cute! blessings, lynn
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 3:54 AM
I know...when I saw that pic of flying ears I thought it was too cute. I love elephants. They are gentle beasts who mourn their dead as we do. Thank you Lynn. ; )
Yvonne Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 1:35 PM
Great job with a very challenging contest. I surely enjoyed it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 7:35 PM
I love elephants because of their sensitive intelligent nature. Thank you much Armand. Blessings, Connie
Daniel Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 3:21 AM
Gentle giants indeed:) thanks for the enjoyable read:) I love elephants:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 7:39 PM
I had never seen an Elephant jump for joy like the little fellow in the bottom photo. Solo cute. Thank you No. ; )
Y. Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 4:15 PM
Hi Connie, What a well written informative write. Thanks for sharing this gem:-) Alexis
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Thank you Alexis. I have been so busy, I have not responded to anyone the past week. I hope to have time to read poetry again real soon. hugs, Connie ; )
Muideen Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Thank you for posting my friend. Excellent.........A.M.
Sathasivam Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 7:47 AM
Excellent write on Wonderful creatures. I always love them. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Couldn't help revisiting...I love the quote of sacred book above, it links so well with what I wrote on elephant and it seems both poems side by side complement each other!When I see elephant I see only the lord there. My house is filled with his images. Hugs Sunita :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 11:40 PM
I agree Sunita. I have a deep respect and love for elephants and have many figures of them in my home too. Thank you for revisiting my poem. I think I will print both yours and mine together. Blessings, Connie ; )
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 8:16 PM
I really had liked yours and thought it should place higher. Congrats, Connie. What will you do with F word? heehee. Me,I will probably do my obsession: FOOD
A   Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 12:13 AM
haha, I just love it Connie, everything you did here. A remarkable creature. LINDA
Godwin Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Wouldn't it be great to spend time with elephants or an elephant without compromising their life / domain? I've always been drawn to them for the reasons you wrote (very interesting!) In a piece of fiction, later a movie (can't remember name), a circus elephant was tied up every night to a stake. Each night she pulled out the stake, found and drank all the lemonade, then returned to her stake and put it in the ground! A very good, heart felt ditty (hey, Jean used same word) ... CayCay
Murray Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Lovely little Dumbo. Lovely little ditty connie.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 5:25 AM
Wonderful a different POV from my poem elephant. I love this description! Well done :)
Devonshire Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 3:49 AM
The photo is so cute, Connie, and I enjoyed the way you defined the specie. I had heard elephants were intelligent, but I never dreamed they were so compassionate. Excellent write!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Wonderful creatures. I collect them and enjoy watching shows about them. This is a great pleiades, Connie with interesting material to match. Blessings, Janis
Callus Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Thank you for the lovely elephant Pleiades and the information you chose to attach to it, Connie! To me the elephant is a gentle giant! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Congrats, Connie. I think it's so cool how much you love this animal!
Leiser Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:38 PM
I love elephants! Nice poem here, Connie! Congrats on your win :)
Krampe Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Back to tell you congrats on your placement, Connie.
Allison Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Connie:-) I've still not posted my elephants one yet!hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:18 PM
I agree Anne-Lise. Th a t way you know your poem had been read. Couldn't read them yesterday. My eyes were too strained. Thank you much. Hugs, Connie ; )
Andresen Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 12:35 PM
- I think it's a nice thing to do, to congratulate all one by one - in the contest I participate in - As a little "thank you for the match" regards ..... - Some I have read before and others not - It will always take some time, a long list of winners - But for me it is common courtesy and a pleasure to congratulate you Connie - Lovely done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 10:56 AM
yes, i was rooting for this, connie... so glad you placed really well!.. my sweet congrats and huggs
Scars Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:54 AM
I love elephants sweet Connie, very well written and lovely pics :) congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Thank you Luloo for placing me on your list. ; )
Merryman Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Connie, thanks for including that info about elephants. I never knew they were so compassionate. You don't think a whole lot about animals having such characteristics. Congrats on your win with your descriptive write on elephants! Blessings!
Haight Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Elephants are wonderful, Connie...one of my favorite animals, and very compassionate as your lovely note explains. I enjoyed your Pleiades poem and congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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