Elements

Elements


hills

surround me
as I drive
quiet conversations

forest

endless spread
of fauna and trees
breathes

lakes

morning’s
reflection [of]

sun
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Griffiths Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 10:13 AM
You've brought these elements of nature together really nicely. Being surrounded by hills makes driving really therapeutic, and seeing more of the endlessness of nature is more achievable by car, even though you don't see it as close up as when you walk.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 8:32 AM
Perfect imagery. Great collection of thoughts.
Wolf Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 7:09 PM
Imaginative imagery, Mike. Hits the spot with me. Takes me back to early-morning drives in Vermont long ago. Thanks, Gershon
Empress Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 6:26 AM
How beautiful, I wish I could do haiku like this, in just few syllables youv shown us your morning.., soul warming really dear Mike, Pleasure reading you, its been a while, Sending you light always
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