....{elements}....

The day's of the id....

Waking, unto another prophecy, fulfilled

While wearing these doxies blinds

That have been placed

Upon many of their eye's....

As if walking within one's sleep

Within a perpetual, yet waning dream

Unto these apparitions; ghastly

That have become, their soon to be

Realities....

These aquanaut's, of destiny's waters

Submerged beneath the churning currents

Of the everlasting's, blackest sea!

These, blinkers of forebodings

Aqua fortis dream's....

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{The Elements}
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Kendrick Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 3:08 PM
Our id wants out to do its thing and the ego and superego won't let it and it is drowning in the churning currents...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Williams Avatar
October 25, 2008 at 11:33 AM
Oh YES..........
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