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True story - in large letters, center of a gray envelope, and we were in Catholic school!

 

Elementary Abashment

ELEMENTARY ABASHMENT

report card jacket
                          jests: to the rocky mountains
                              flustered crimson cheeks

Kim Rodrigues © 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/18/2017 11:45:00 PM
You stuck to the 5 7 5 format in creating this stimulating senryu and that is all to the good! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2017 5:23:00 AM
Thank you :)
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