Elemental Senses

Air shares its delightful grace
  stroking, caressing every face.
Wind tickles crawling clouds
  Then breezes by whistling loud.
Fire jigs a spritely dance
  spouting quips with pops and 
  cracks.
Water gulps a bubbling brew
  then babbles back a trickling tune.
Earth gazes cooly at warm light
 and breathes the musk of days 
damp night.

©  11-27-2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/11/2013 6:56:00 PM
What a clever way to humanize the big five.
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Date: 12/16/2012 10:53:00 AM
this is wonderful. WAs noticing you have not posted in a while. Hope to see you doing so very soon. happy Christmas season to y ou.
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Tanya Harrington
Date: 12/17/2012 12:52:00 PM
Got lots of pieces written, just not able to get them finished. May take a break for awhile and delve into other endeavors for awhile. :)
Date: 12/10/2012 2:31:00 PM
I so hope you are having a fine holiday season. I have enjoyed reading your write today & the use of sound if great. Light & Love
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Date: 12/5/2012 10:19:00 AM
beautiful walk you take us on here Tanya, one feeling the sensation as we read....
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Date: 11/29/2012 7:23:00 PM
Great descriptive write on a travel through elements. Your work is inspiring. Hugs michael
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Date: 11/28/2012 1:07:00 PM
Tanya a nice journey through the elements...David
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Date: 11/27/2012 4:27:00 PM
Your rhyme and meter is phenomenal my friend! I am amazed at your talented quill with this incredible poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/27/2012 2:57:00 PM
Wow, very descriptive words, bringing out all senses of one's imagination. Fluidity to the flow of the poem. Great write Tanya. Sending Smiles, Connie
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Date: 11/27/2012 12:32:00 PM
This one is great with wonderful flow, rhyme, and rhythm. I am glad that I chose it to read this afternoon..Sara
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