Tanya Harrington Poet Rhyme

Elemental Senses

Air shares its delightful grace
  stroking, caressing every face.
Wind tickles crawling clouds
  Then breezes by whistling loud.
Fire jigs a spritely dance
  spouting quips with pops and 
  cracks.
Water gulps a bubbling brew
  then babbles back a trickling tune.
Earth gazes cooly at warm light
 and breathes the musk of days 
damp night.

©  11-27-2012

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David Fisher February 11, 2013 at 6:56 PM What a clever way to humanize the big five.

Andrea Dietrich December 16, 2012 at 10:53 AM this is wonderful. WAs noticing you have not posted in a while. Hope to see you doing so very soon. happy Christmas season to y ou. Tanya Harrington December 17, 2012 at 12:52 PM Got lots of pieces written, just not able to get them finished. May take a break for awhile and delve into other endeavors for awhile. :)

Debbie Guzzi December 10, 2012 at 2:31 PM I so hope you are having a fine holiday season. I have enjoyed reading your write today & the use of sound if great. Light & Love

Harry Horsman December 5, 2012 at 10:19 AM beautiful walk you take us on here Tanya, one feeling the sensation as we read....

Michael J. Falotico November 29, 2012 at 7:23 PM Great descriptive write on a travel through elements. Your work is inspiring. Hugs michael

David Williams November 28, 2012 at 1:07 PM Tanya a nice journey through the elements...David

Russell Sivey November 27, 2012 at 4:27 PM Your rhyme and meter is phenomenal my friend! I am amazed at your talented quill with this incredible poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Connie Gildersleeve November 27, 2012 at 2:57 PM Wow, very descriptive words, bringing out all senses of one's imagination. Fluidity to the flow of the poem. Great write Tanya. Sending Smiles, Connie

Sara Kendrick November 27, 2012 at 12:32 PM This one is great with wonderful flow, rhyme, and rhythm. I am glad that I chose it to read this afternoon..Sara