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Element of Earth

Quietly, heaven paints the earth
Brown and orange of meadow's birth;
Picturesque view, a season’s tray
Refreshing the fields on display
To shed harvest in rich glory,
Splashing grains through a dazzling way.

And blue dust glistens through the trees
Hills from her feet swirls with new breeze;
While children on dunes reel and run free
Leaves dancing a cycle's pirouette;
That nature spins on a trapeze,
Stem to stem, my earth-tune's duet.


Mar 10, 2016
ELEMENTS Part 1: EARTH Contest
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Muideen Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 3:26 PM
What a lovely and enjoyable poem. Good luck in the contest..........A.M.
A   Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 11:34 PM
Rhoma, congratulations on your "Elements Of Earth win." LINDA
Raven Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Hi Rhoma, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad
Gupta Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Indeed picturesque....
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 1:50 AM
cycle's pirouette ... spins on a trapeze ... earth-tune's duet. A very musical ode to Element Earth. I like it. Well done!
Leiser Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 11:38 PM
Congrats on your win, Rhoma :)
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:49 PM
Brilliant take on theme n wonderful win Rhoma... big congrats!
Davey Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Congratulations on a well deserving poem and thank you for entering
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