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Element Earth

Pulses of earth caressing my heart
I feel each grain as if hourglass sand.
Rhythm of life ticking from birth to depart
Cultures softly tinged by the soul of the land.

I hear the call of a presence borne of the past 
Echoes of bounty rebound in this world.
Harmonies vibrate, of land ample and vast
Then a warning of future madness unfurled.

I see creation and nurture as they mingle in soil
Seasons reflect within earth’s precise hue.
Figures of mountains implying peace and turmoil
Mysteries are hinted amidst historic old clues.

Lingering scents drift of insatiable dreams
Tastes of the landscape, enrich and contrast.
Cycles and motion of existence and schemes
Undeniable connections, to earth are steadfast.

Cleansed and absorbing I open my eyes
Dirt still caresses and quivers my skin.
Few understand, of land and mans’ ties
Of middles and ends, yet a scene to begin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Godwin Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 12:10 AM
I see congrats are in order and I can understand why. For those who do no understand our ties to the earth, your poem will provide enlightenment. Deep and sincere, I enjoyed each word ... CayCay
Woods    Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 2:33 PM
I can't remember the placing maybe 49th out of 50 or something ha ha : ) but I do think I am in my happy place when I'm thinking deeply about a subject.
A   Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 11:34 PM
Mark, congratulations on your "Elements Of Earth win." LINDA
Raven Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 2:23 PM
Hi Mark, an excellent write my friend. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your creativity shines in its simplicity my friend. The flow is so easy and you can easily tell that you know the earth and its ways Mark. Loved the write. It is deserving of but one rating....Seven, and it does go into my faves....Vlad.
Cheema Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Amazing! A well deserved placement, Mark!
Woods    Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Cheers Balveen. I found it to be a complex challenge.
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:52 PM
Brilliant take on theme n wonderful win Mark... big congrats!
Woods    Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Thanks Doc. I was worried I may have taken the theme the wrong way!
Davey Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 7:38 PM
Congratulations on a well deserving poem and thank you for entering
Woods    Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Tough contest Brian, thank you for a fantastic challenge. : )
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