Electronic Haiku

The phone rings Robo-call I Vanish Forward e-mail Salvation promised Watch Seinfeld

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2010 2:18:00 PM

hahhaa, Watch Seinfeld. Is this the voice of the robot telling us to do that? I think it's GREAT advice!

Dana Smith

Date: 12/21/2010 4:19:00 PM

Very interesting. Enjoyed.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 4:38:00 PM

Interesting work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/16/2010 8:19:00 AM

Very humorous and witty write on Electronics, Jimbo

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/16/2010 4:48:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today James. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/15/2010 5:24:00 PM

goodness? Onward...Light & Love

John Rhinem

Date: 12/15/2010 4:30:00 PM

Smile ~ "Yes," I somehow See it All now; unfolding before my very amazed Eyes my friend...."Love," John!:) ~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/15/2010 4:28:00 PM

Thank goodness the "Robo-calls" have stopped now that the election is over. (I needed help with the translation, being a neanderthal.) And the emails that promise salvation? Well, the jury's still out on that, Jimbo. Love Seinfeld, though! Very cool "Electronic Haiku." Love, Carolyn