Electronic Haiku

The phone rings

Robo-call

I

Vanish 

 



Forward e-mail

Salvation promised

Watch

Seinfeld
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 2:18 PM
hahhaa, Watch Seinfeld. Is this the voice of the robot telling us to do that? I think it's GREAT advice!
Smith Avatar
December 21, 2010 at 4:19 PM
Very interesting. Enjoyed.
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 4:38 PM
Interesting work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 8:19 AM
Very humorous and witty write on Electronics, Jimbo
Brown Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 4:48 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today James. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 5:24 PM
goodness? Onward...Light & Love
Rhinem Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 4:30 PM
Smile ~ "Yes," I somehow See it All now; unfolding before my very amazed Eyes my friend...."Love," John!:) ~
Devonshire Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 4:28 PM
Thank goodness the "Robo-calls" have stopped now that the election is over. (I needed help with the translation, being a neanderthal.) And the emails that promise salvation? Well, the jury's still out on that, Jimbo. Love Seinfeld, though! Very cool "Electronic Haiku." Love, Carolyn
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