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Brian Strand Contest Name EIGHT,NINE TEN any form,any theme single 8/9 or 10 lines ELECTRON The silver sphere did glimmer *****, as it flashed across the void, inside a craft androids did steer, valve electrons were employed. In outer space a negative base, balanced the electron car, the speed of light a course did trace, aligned to a positive star.

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Date: 12/19/2011 6:55:00 PM
yes Russell, i believe we have visitors, my "white light"poem brought me more questions than answers....the copper that arrested us was focusing only one eye on us when he came, head turned sideways , was he an alien:)
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Date: 12/19/2011 11:44:00 AM
Oh, I just love this write Don! I'm a Fantasy/Sci-Fi nut! I have written a book based on aliens trying to infiltrate their species here on Earth, over a long period of time! Anyway, your poem shows great signs of science fiction!! I love this poem! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 12/19/2011 9:15:00 AM
Love how your mind works. Your queer silver sphere hits Higg's bosun hard, and here we are; we splatter into matter.
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Date: 12/19/2011 6:02:00 AM
Love it Don x
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Date: 12/19/2011 5:45:00 AM
I hope that your sky is big.
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Date: 12/19/2011 4:57:00 AM
the song was sung by bruno mars, lighters up in the air, instead of worry i went to the bar, the pot was won with one pair. hi don..you amaze that you can always think of rhymes to all poems... wish i could ...love it
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Don Johnson
Date: 12/19/2011 3:30:00 PM
i get this chatter in me head, not schitzo just rhymes instead, thanks Patrick...mate ...

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