Don Johnson Poet Rhyme

Electron

	Brian Strand
Contest Name	EIGHT,NINE TEN any form,any theme single 8/9 or 10 lines 

ELECTRON 

The silver sphere did glimmer *****,
as it flashed across the void,
inside a craft androids did steer,
valve electrons were employed.
In outer space a negative base,
balanced the electron car,
the speed of light a course did trace,
aligned to a positive star.

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Don Johnson December 19, 2011 at 6:55 PM yes Russell, i believe we have visitors, my "white light"poem brought me more questions than answers....the copper that arrested us was focusing only one eye on us when he came, head turned sideways , was he an alien:)

Russell Sivey December 19, 2011 at 11:44 AM Oh, I just love this write Don! I'm a Fantasy/Sci-Fi nut! I have written a book based on aliens trying to infiltrate their species here on Earth, over a long period of time! Anyway, your poem shows great signs of science fiction!! I love this poem! Awesome Work!!

John Smith December 19, 2011 at 9:15 AM Love how your mind works. Your queer silver sphere hits Higg's bosun hard, and here we are; we splatter into matter.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 19, 2011 at 6:02 AM Love it Don x

Tony Lane December 19, 2011 at 5:45 AM I hope that your sky is big.

Patrick Cornwall December 19, 2011 at 4:57 AM the song was sung by bruno mars, lighters up in the air, instead of worry i went to the bar, the pot was won with one pair. hi don..you amaze that you can always think of rhymes to all poems... wish i could ...love it Don Johnson December 19, 2011 at 3:30 PM i get this chatter in me head, not schitzo just rhymes instead, thanks Patrick...mate ...