Electric Wires

the electric wires bouncing in air topped with snow thoughts in a balance Heidi Sands 2/24/19

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/26/2019 2:29:00 PM

A striking image 'balanced' by an equally good jux at the end, Heidi. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/26/2019 2:50:00 PM

Thank you Paul :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/24/2019 9:59:00 PM

nice and cute. You noticed perfect.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/25/2019 12:50:00 AM

Thank you :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/24/2019 2:35:00 PM

Excellent metaphor! Wish I'd thought of it. A "Fav".

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/24/2019 2:46:00 PM

Thank you M.L. I appreciate you considering it a FAV. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/24/2019 11:40:00 AM

How aesthetic Haiku! Excellent dearest, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/24/2019 11:49:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/24/2019 11:29:00 AM

A dangerous combination for sure, Heidi. Reminding me of a sad story. An introspective write.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/24/2019 11:49:00 AM

Oh, sorry to hear it reminds you of a sad story. I appreciate your visit :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/24/2019 10:02:00 AM

Hadn't thought of that, good one Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/24/2019 11:20:00 AM

Thank you Charlie! I hope you have a nice day :)