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Electric Wires

the electric wires
    bouncing in air topped with snow
            thoughts in a balance



Heidi Sands

2/24/19

snowhaiku

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Paul Callus

February 26, 2019 at 2:29 PM

A striking image 'balanced' by an equally good jux at the end, Heidi. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands

February 26, 2019 at 2:50 PM

Thank you Paul :)

Anisha Dutta

February 24, 2019 at 9:59 PM

nice and cute. You noticed perfect.

Heidi Sands

February 25, 2019 at 12:50 AM

Thank you :)

M. L. Kiser

February 24, 2019 at 2:35 PM

Excellent metaphor! Wish I'd thought of it. A "Fav".

Heidi Sands

February 24, 2019 at 2:46 PM

Thank you M.L. I appreciate you considering it a FAV. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 24, 2019 at 11:40 AM

How aesthetic Haiku! Excellent dearest, Heidi!

Heidi Sands

February 24, 2019 at 11:49 AM

Thank you Demetrios :)

Caren Krutsinger

February 24, 2019 at 11:29 AM

A dangerous combination for sure, Heidi. Reminding me of a sad story. An introspective write.

Heidi Sands

February 24, 2019 at 11:49 AM

Oh, sorry to hear it reminds you of a sad story. I appreciate your visit :)

Charlie Smith

February 24, 2019 at 10:02 AM

Hadn't thought of that, good one Heidi...

Heidi Sands

February 24, 2019 at 11:20 AM

Thank you Charlie! I hope you have a nice day :)

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