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Electric Wind

ELECTRIC WIND

electric the wind
low black clouds over laden
wet tulips thrusting

mixed emotions now
and i walking with shifting eyes
some winter left

black cat on the fence
between the pickets    arching
calendar    full moon

is wet the feeling?
the whole world saturated?
coffee    dry quarters

Copyright © Daver Austin | Year Posted 2012

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/16/2012 9:19:00 AM daver ,,very interesting and steep... to expect time change soon.... now i will enjoy coffee..pd Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 3/16/2012 8:40:00 AM I can sniff the coffee; we can just sit back and enjoy the coffee and the storm. Nice! Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/16/2012 6:27:00 AM like these daver, especially the first one, that is a classic. harry Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/16/2012 5:58:00 AM I especially like the last one..I was feeling that way earlier this week but I know we need the spring rains to make it through the summer..Great work..Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/15/2012 6:44:00 PM WEll, I hope the electric wind is a blow dryer!! GEt all that damn wet out. GOOD one, DAver. Great images. About nacreous, it means "luminous or like mother of pearl!" I hope it works for snowfall!! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/15/2012 2:23:00 PM This fit just right Daver, well done. - oxox Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Ann Roske Date: 3/15/2012 1:00:00 PM hey daver - you just described the weather here today. nice job! Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 3/15/2012 11:53:00 AM This took me two readings....each one stands on it's own merit. Love it! A melancholy look at the seasons and more. Login to Reply