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Electric Wind

ELECTRIC WIND electric the wind low black clouds over laden wet tulips thrusting mixed emotions now and i walking with shifting eyes some winter left black cat on the fence between the pickets arching calendar full moon is wet the feeling? the whole world saturated? coffee dry quarters

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2012 9:19:00 AM

daver ,,very interesting and steep... to expect time change soon.... now i will enjoy coffee..pd

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/16/2012 8:40:00 AM

I can sniff the coffee; we can just sit back and enjoy the coffee and the storm. Nice!

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/16/2012 6:27:00 AM

like these daver, especially the first one, that is a classic. harry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/16/2012 5:58:00 AM

I especially like the last one..I was feeling that way earlier this week but I know we need the spring rains to make it through the summer..Great work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2012 6:44:00 PM

WEll, I hope the electric wind is a blow dryer!! GEt all that damn wet out. GOOD one, DAver. Great images. About nacreous, it means "luminous or like mother of pearl!" I hope it works for snowfall!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2012 2:23:00 PM

This fit just right Daver, well done. - oxox Anne-Lise

Ann Roske

Date: 3/15/2012 1:00:00 PM

hey daver - you just described the weather here today. nice job!

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/15/2012 11:53:00 AM

This took me two readings....each one stands on it's own merit. Love it! A melancholy look at the seasons and more.