Daver Austin Poet Haiku

Electric Wind

ELECTRIC WIND

electric the wind
low black clouds over laden
wet tulips thrusting

mixed emotions now
and i walking with shifting eyes
some winter left

black cat on the fence
between the pickets    arching
calendar    full moon

is wet the feeling?
the whole world saturated?
coffee    dry quarters

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Poet Destroyer A March 16, 2012 at 9:19 AM daver ,,very interesting and steep... to expect time change soon.... now i will enjoy coffee..pd

Elizabeth Wesley March 16, 2012 at 8:40 AM I can sniff the coffee; we can just sit back and enjoy the coffee and the storm. Nice!

Harry Horsman March 16, 2012 at 6:27 AM like these daver, especially the first one, that is a classic. harry

Sara Kendrick March 16, 2012 at 5:58 AM I especially like the last one..I was feeling that way earlier this week but I know we need the spring rains to make it through the summer..Great work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2012 at 6:44 PM WEll, I hope the electric wind is a blow dryer!! GEt all that damn wet out. GOOD one, DAver. Great images. About nacreous, it means "luminous or like mother of pearl!" I hope it works for snowfall!!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2012 at 2:23 PM This fit just right Daver, well done. - oxox Anne-Lise

Ann Roske March 15, 2012 at 1:00 PM hey daver - you just described the weather here today. nice job!

Carrie Richards March 15, 2012 at 11:53 AM This took me two readings....each one stands on it's own merit. Love it! A melancholy look at the seasons and more.