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Electric Experience

Electric bolts fill the sky My hair stands on end Sky high Russell Sivey Entrant into Cyndi MacMillan's "CREATIVITY-- WRITE A MODERN HAIKU" contest!

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Gwendolen Song
Date: 12/12/2011 8:10:00 AM
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I am envisioning an Albert Einstein-looking Russell with this modern haiku. Very fun juxtaposition...oh, hey! Forgot to mention ...thanks for sponsoring the stockings tribute contest that I had so much fun writing for. Appreciate you honoring my creativity too. All the best this up coming week. Gwendolen
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Kash Poet
Date: 12/8/2011 11:40:00 PM
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A funny write here Russell.Congrats on your win.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/8/2011 11:33:00 PM
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very interesting final line! and cute title. Congratulations on this fun haiku, Russell.
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 12/8/2011 5:48:00 PM
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congrats on your win, 'electrifying' and ultra modern, I like the humour, maybe a double meaning(?)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 12/8/2011 4:27:00 PM
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Funny, Russell. Congrats on your win! Kim
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Edward Mccormick
Date: 12/8/2011 2:49:00 PM
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Fantastic Russell... This is clearly super charged! ~ECMc
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 12/8/2011 1:17:00 PM
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Oh wow what an experience that must be indeed! This was a cool take on the contest, super congrats Russel!
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Natalie The Rogue Rhymer
Date: 12/8/2011 12:35:00 PM
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Very nice Russ-love the last line!
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David Williams
Date: 12/8/2011 12:22:00 PM
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Russell congrats on your win..David
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 12/8/2011 11:04:00 AM
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Congratulations on your placement in Cyndi's "Creativity" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/30/2011 12:01:00 PM
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Electrifying poetry, Russell! I hope your hair lays flat in time for Christmas. What a witty haiku! Best wishes in Cyndi's contest. Love, Carolyn
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