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Electric Experience

Electric bolts fill the sky
My hair stands on end
Sky high

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Cyndi MacMillan's "CREATIVITY-- WRITE A MODERN HAIKU" contest!

Copyright © Russell Sivey | Year Posted 2011

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December 12, 2011 at 8:10 AM

I am envisioning an Albert Einstein-looking Russell with this modern haiku. Very fun juxtaposition...oh, hey! Forgot to mention ...thanks for sponsoring the stockings tribute contest that I had so much fun writing for. Appreciate you honoring my creativity too. All the best this up coming week. Gwendolen

December 8, 2011 at 11:40 PM

A funny write here Russell.Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

December 8, 2011 at 11:33 PM

very interesting final line! and cute title. Congratulations on this fun haiku, Russell.

Charlotte Puddifoot

December 8, 2011 at 5:48 PM

congrats on your win, 'electrifying' and ultra modern, I like the humour, maybe a double meaning(?)

December 8, 2011 at 4:27 PM

Funny, Russell. Congrats on your win! Kim

Edward Mccormick

December 8, 2011 at 2:49 PM

Fantastic Russell... This is clearly super charged! ~ECMc

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

December 8, 2011 at 1:17 PM

Oh wow what an experience that must be indeed! This was a cool take on the contest, super congrats Russel!

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

December 8, 2011 at 12:35 PM

Very nice Russ-love the last line!

December 8, 2011 at 12:22 PM

Russell congrats on your win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 8, 2011 at 11:04 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Cyndi's "Creativity" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

November 30, 2011 at 12:01 PM

Electrifying poetry, Russell! I hope your hair lays flat in time for Christmas. What a witty haiku! Best wishes in Cyndi's contest. Love, Carolyn

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