Electric Blue

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This is a five stanza haiku. Tradionally a haiku is three stanzas.

This is my haiku It's about Electric blue borrowed, old and new Do you look through blue? What excites your horizon? Do you have a clue? Electric blue eyes (Of which I have two of, love) Sometimes see grey skies Blue green gray segue Still looking through electric Blue, blows you away Electric blue eyes What I look through to see you See you in disguise

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