Eleanor Rigby - the Beginning

(Hopefully you could sing this to tune of original song)

What of the unloved friendless children?
What of the unloved friendless children?

Eleanor Rigby 
searches the audience hoping her parents have come.
She’s in a play,
and when it’s over,
she hears applause, but she knows that her parents aren’t there.
Why don’t they care?

Friendless unloved children,
there always are a few.
Friendless unloved children.
Whatever can they do?

Her fifth-grade teacher
seeing how Eleanor sits while the other kids play
every day!
She asks some students
if they’ll befriend Eleanor, but she’s not listened to.
What can she do?

Friendless unloved children,
there always are a few.
Friendless unloved children.
Whatever can they do?

Eleanor Rigby
finished her school, was a janitor all of her life -
never a wife.
Her fifth-grade teacher
rarely succeeded in helping the child with no friend;
then came her end. .  .

Friendless unloved children (what of the friendless unloved children?)
there always are a few.
Friendless unloved chldren (what of the friendless unloved children?)
Whatever can they do?

Aug. 27, 2019
for the "Eleanor Rigby Who Was She" Contest of Jerry T Curtis
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Blodgett Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 4:56 PM
A great part of my past was my involvement with foster children, both professionally and in my home. I truly appreciate this one. Write on!! Lonna
Godwin Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 8:00 PM
You did a great job, a dramatic write that my tone deaf self thought stayed on track (tone deaf or not, I've got that tune memorized.) I like where you took this. Should I get mine written, I think it will have a very unexpected view point. Love, CayCay
Johnson Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 8:47 PM
Thank you for making me sad. :) But what else could you do? The subject called for telling us, Eleanor's story true. But knowing all to well ourselves, her sadness deep inside. Is probably the very reason that Eleanor died. <3
Laurie Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 8:47 PM
Hello Andrea … not having a musical bone in my body I find these lyrics hard to put a tune to, but boy oh boy, are they a powerful set of lyrics - love to hear a singer maybe yourself sing them - thank you
Adams Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:54 PM
an astonishing write my friend, i haven't attempted this one and not sure if i will but must say your is very well crafted, good luck in the contest :) hugs
Y. Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 3:40 PM
WoW! Andrea, You have penned some well written lyrics. I feel so sad for Eleanor, she was such a loner. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great weekend my friend. Off to listen to the original song by the Beetles:-) Alexis
Proxenos Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Such an awesome write - the Beatles WOW Andrea - I love this song - well penned my friend! Hugs, Jenny.
Sergi Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 9:32 AM
Hi Andrea: I was totally in awe of your penning this old relicand you did it so well! Thanks for the heads up on my typo.
Sergi Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 9:32 AM
(PENNING THIS OLD RELIC)
Green Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 7:33 AM
Really nicely done Andrea. I wrote a similar styled piece for the contest but I like yours much better. Best of luck.
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 7:11 AM
You did this so well Andrea..there are so many unloved friendless children in this world..you gave them a voice with this lyric. It resonates. All the best.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 6:40 AM
Nicely done, Andrea! Yes, so sad, the friendless children.
Cunningham Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 1:49 AM
Great job Andrea, yes it works. You should have done an mp3. Good luck. Tom
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 12:22 AM
I am impressed Andrea, fantastic job. Hugs Rick.
Mcgee Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 7:28 PM
You penned a great picture of her life. Nicely done.
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