Elation of Soul

The discomfort of dear soul
Wants elation and manic goal
Intoxication's sport on smokers' spot
Fascinating aromas and Jack Daniels' blot

Strolling out by getting drunk
In your charm I have sunk
A distant melody makes me tremble
In snowy woods my senses assemble

Blizzard transforming the species alike
All wild passions abruptly arrive
Want of Marlboro fades away
Amazed, I throw Dunhill and sway.
- Ridah Tariq
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 9:45 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Tariq Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 10:19 PM
Thankyou
Krutsinger Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 9:56 PM
A intriguing missive. Welcome toSoup! Keep posting poems,
Tariq Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 10:19 PM
Thankyou
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