Elation - 7 Letter Acrostic

E ach pebbled path awaits the fall mum without momentum
L anguishing until the fall of foot brings them a pace.
A ll static objects seek the joy, the soulful strum 
T hat gives to some and uncommon sense of face
I dling not within the static shell, the unnoticed place.
O nly movement brings the eye, the heart to hold, the rise
N o stone unrolled can bring an accolade to such as I.



* End rhyme pattern of rhyme royal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 10:04 PM
Yes, sometimes we need someone to push us further, and make us better! I really liked the word choice for your acrostic poem. It was unique, and not a word that I would have thought of. This poem was written very well. I am surprised that it did not place higher! Terrific work, Debbie! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the nice comments. I really appreciate it!
A  Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 8:16 PM
Well done Debbie, .......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 2:27 PM
Debbie, congrats on your placement in the acrostic challenge contest! An excellent write...I'm surprised it did not place higher...Love and blessings, Rhonda
A   Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 11:25 AM
awesome one DG, congratulations on your Acrostics challenge...love Linda
Ekechukwu Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 7:39 PM
Awesome right and well arranged. Kudos to you and thanks for your kind assuring word of encouragement. Please teach me my teacher,I want to be your obedient pupil pleaseeeeee am serious and ready. Love and hugs. Always, Baron Of Ebullion
May Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 7:36 AM
congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 12:26 AM
Deb, I really liked this one for its uniqueness. I could tell that whoever had written it had put a lot of thought into it . It's very deep and I did not quite get all the lines. That's the only reason it did not score higher. Congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
Poet Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 7:38 PM
Great! Very nicely done Debi.Love it.Yeah I am fine.Only busy with haiku :)
Goff Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 7:40 PM
A very personal expression of self-worth...very cool Deb! I like it!
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