Ela

Story little boy who Who's in love with you Wants to be together Wants to be with you forever. I like your style I like your smile I like who you are For me you're my star. As the autumn breezes And all the cold wishes The leaves just keep on falling. We keep on parting We keep on fleeting The past is far gone. ELA Would you remember me Little boy blue A little boy who loved you.

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Nato Calubiran

Date: 6/5/2013 10:52:00 PM

it doesnt just sound like, it really is a childhood romance.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2013 10:34:00 PM

This is very sweet. Sounds like an old childhood romance?

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 5/25/2013 4:36:00 PM

Congrats on your poem and win. I know just how you feel. :)

Nato Calubiran

Date: 5/24/2013 10:02:00 PM

My very 1st poem in soup has won a mention. Yes motivation! Thanks PD.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/24/2013 1:41:00 PM

NATO, congratulations with your winning poem, in the "Incurable Romantic" contest... ~xox* Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2013 3:31:00 AM

- Nato, welcomed the P-Soup. - "Ela" is a very well written poem, well done. - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - Welcome to read / comment on my pages. - Good luck with your poem. - Have a nice day my new friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nato Calubiran
Date: 5/21/2013 3:38:00 AM

Thanks for commenting. I'd really love if people would comment on my poems. It makes it fun and interactive. PoetrySoup is a place where people appreciate writing poems as an art, I like it here.