Ela

Story little boy who
Who's in love with you
Wants to be together
Wants to be with you forever.

I like your style
I like your smile
I like who you are
For me you're my star.

As the autumn breezes
And all the cold wishes
The leaves just keep on falling.

We keep on parting
We keep on fleeting
The past is far gone.

ELA
Would you remember me
Little boy blue
A little boy who loved you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Calubiran Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 10:52 PM
it doesnt just sound like, it really is a childhood romance.
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 10:34 PM
This is very sweet. Sounds like an old childhood romance?
De Burca Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 4:36 PM
Congrats on your poem and win. I know just how you feel. :)
Calubiran Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 10:02 PM
My very 1st poem in soup has won a mention. Yes motivation! Thanks PD.
A   Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 1:41 PM
NATO, congratulations with your winning poem, in the "Incurable Romantic" contest... ~xox* Linda
Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 3:31 AM
- Nato, welcomed the P-Soup. - "Ela" is a very well written poem, well done. - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - Welcome to read / comment on my pages. - Good luck with your poem. - Have a nice day my new friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Calubiran Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 3:38 AM
Thanks for commenting. I'd really love if people would comment on my poems. It makes it fun and interactive. PoetrySoup is a place where people appreciate writing poems as an art, I like it here.
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