Eileen

In a charming little house in the middle of the street, I know a lady that you would like to meet. At first glance she seems a bit shy, but she has a wonderful twinkle in her eye. A family she is blessed with daughters and a son, her grandchildren keep her always on the run. She's had her share of sorrow and bad times too, but she carries on what else can she do? I hope one day you will meet her Eileen is her name, for it you do my friend you will feel the same. JSergi Contest: Put your Best Rhyme Forward

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/10/2013 9:36:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Joseph

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/11/2013 4:37:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Ram for you kind post.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2013 8:44:00 PM

hi, Joseph enjoying this poem once again....congratulations..linda

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/10/2013 8:51:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it Linda thanks for the congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2013 3:47:00 PM

cute one. I was thinking of that song too from the 80's come on Eileen!! Congrats for your win.

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/10/2013 8:52:00 PM

Thanks very much Andrea for the congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/10/2013 11:52:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "Put Your Best Rhyme Forward" contest: Sponsored by: Just That Archaic Poet - Nice to take part - a pleasure to read yours Joseph - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/10/2013 3:41:00 PM

Thank you very much Anne Lise for your kind post always a pleasure reading your work also

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/23/2013 8:50:00 PM

what a beautiful tribute to what sounds like a wonderful lady...nice poem, enjoyed reading this one tonight :)

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/4/2013 6:15:00 PM

She is Sandra thanks so much for your comment

Len Gasun

Date: 11/23/2013 8:44:00 PM

This is extremely a wonderful, beautiful and so sweet poem for this lady my dear friend, Joseph. I'm pretty sure, she'll extremely love and enjoy this lovely poem of yours as much as I do. I hope we'll meet both of you someday. Thank you so much for sharing one of your precious gems. Have a grace-filled wkend! love lots & hugs, Leonora

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/4/2013 6:16:00 PM

HI Leonora she is wonderful person thanks for your kind words

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/23/2013 4:02:00 PM

I am certain that the same I will feel/ for so much love she seems to emanate/ that one only can find in his dream! Wonderfully expressed! Thank you Joseph!

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/4/2013 6:17:00 PM

Demetrio thanks so much for stopping by and for you kind words.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2013 11:08:00 AM

Joseph, a beautiful poem for the lady, who lived in a little charming house. I'm just enjoying how you described, the wonderful twinkle in her eyes. Makes me want to glance at her, and feel the warmth of a good nature woman.... Thank you for the good morning hello... always~ LINDA

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/4/2013 6:19:00 PM

Linda thank you so much for your comments on this one. She is a wonderful person.