Eight Is Enough

Eight wizened words to elicit thoughts mordacious.
Not shackled to the horde, a trifle bit audacious.
The cartridge to loiter, waiting, bored, to fire out rhymes vexatious.

March 23 2017.  For John Hamilton's Eight word challenge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ajmal Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 8:06 AM
A very beautiful written poem, I really enjoyed reading it however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest about them
Adams Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Holy cow. I think I'm withdrawing my entry now! AMAZING! I want your brain.
Vinson Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 8:47 PM
Damn.... : ) Square root of 49, baby.
Ritz Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 10:02 PM
Thanks Doug!
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