Eichenlaub/Oak Leaves/ Hojas Del Roble

Sanft fällt das Eichenlaub
Jetzt noch langsam im späten Herbst 
Vor ersten Winterboten

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Softly falling oak leaves 
Now slowly before late autumn
Before first winter's message

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Suave caída de hojas de roble 
Antes del primero mensajero de invierno
Aún  al fin del otoño

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Note: Due to the rules of a Haiku, 
the translations differ slightly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Get the feeling with this one of peace and gentle drift of the leaves to earth...Keep the descriptive and expressive pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on so many of my poems...Glad you like the one about "Marlin Monroe" we ate there on our vacation....Sara
Brown Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 4:51 AM
Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Gert. I enjoyed reading it this morning. I am so happy to see you are inspired to write more and more these days dear friend. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 10:14 PM
Never experienced autumn nor winter over here--but this haiku brought me there, Gert! could picture that oak leaf falling, falling, falling... :)--nikko :) thanks again for all your comments ;)
Mehta Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 6:07 PM
A wonderful haiku - softly and slowly - nice expression.
A   Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 5:47 PM
very beautiful, enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the haiu note on the bottom. Have yourself a nice one,..p.d.
Richards Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 5:37 PM
Your words are as soft as those leaves falling....so beautifully! :)
Sweetheart Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 5:02 PM
This write is beyond rules for creativity .. it is superb Gert and its visual imagery is so grand to view tonight... expecting thunder storms making the trees appear to be fighting each other.. this is so mellow to read... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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