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Eichenlaub/Oak Leaves/ Hojas Del Roble

Sanft fällt das Eichenlaub Jetzt noch langsam im späten Herbst Vor ersten Winterboten ------------------------------------------------ Softly falling oak leaves Now slowly before late autumn Before first winter's message ----------------------------------------------- Suave caída de hojas de roble Antes del primero mensajero de invierno Aún al fin del otoño __________________________________ Note: Due to the rules of a Haiku, the translations differ slightly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/6/2010 12:16:00 PM
Get the feeling with this one of peace and gentle drift of the leaves to earth...Keep the descriptive and expressive pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on so many of my poems...Glad you like the one about "Marlin Monroe" we ate there on our vacation....Sara
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Date: 6/5/2010 4:51:00 AM
Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Gert. I enjoyed reading it this morning. I am so happy to see you are inspired to write more and more these days dear friend. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2010 10:14:00 PM
Never experienced autumn nor winter over here--but this haiku brought me there, Gert! could picture that oak leaf falling, falling, falling... :)--nikko :) thanks again for all your comments ;)
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Date: 6/4/2010 6:07:00 PM
A wonderful haiku - softly and slowly - nice expression.
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Date: 6/4/2010 5:47:00 PM
very beautiful, enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the haiu note on the bottom. Have yourself a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 6/4/2010 5:37:00 PM
Your words are as soft as those leaves falling....so beautifully! :)
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Date: 6/4/2010 5:02:00 PM
This write is beyond rules for creativity .. it is superb Gert and its visual imagery is so grand to view tonight... expecting thunder storms making the trees appear to be fighting each other.. this is so mellow to read... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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