Egypt

her copper desert flames old pyramid's headstone... earth's timeless mystique incense fill the wall to seal odor of glory... preserving legends PremiereContest 120: Brian Strand

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:09:00 PM

Nette, CONGRATS on your reddish theme. Luv ~LINDA~

Paul Callus

Date: 3/10/2016 2:39:00 PM

What a lovely senryu, Nette! Egypt is a land of inspiration and history. Pity that the present political situation has made travel to this place somewhat prohibitive. hugs // paul

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/7/2016 7:39:00 AM

Egypt...the cradle of civilization and wonder... Congrats Nette, on your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/6/2016 10:13:00 AM

You picked her symbols and put them on display with a fiery red. Amazing that such things were built, but what purpose did they serve? I am thinking about this now because of you.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/4/2016 2:04:00 PM

Hi Nette, A Lovely Senryu. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Egypt, one of my favourite places especially if you go back many centuries. A Seven....Vlad.