Egotist

The egotist sat
me-deep in conversation...
smiling~ happy~ him

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/25/2013 12:16:00 AM

nice senryu ;} thank you for reading my Illusions ;}

Kash Poet

Date: 6/18/2013 12:20:00 PM

Very nice Senryu here Sara.Enjoyed the read.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/15/2013 11:35:00 PM

Excellent. Very cleverly written. Enjoyed. Tfs

Len Gasun

Date: 6/15/2013 10:22:00 PM

This is another fantastic write of yours my dear friend Sara. I'm so delighted & grateful to read it today! Thank you so much for sharing! Sending you all my thoughts, love & prayers always! God bless you and your family! Warm big Hugs! love lots, Leonora

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/15/2013 7:51:00 PM

He must be happy with himself, maybe being so kind as to let you be so deep in the conversation... its probably about himself! I am enthralled by the this splendid poem here this evening! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/15/2013 7:44:00 PM

Very clever ode here. I think I am a member of the me generation. Or maybe it is the next generation? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/15/2013 1:23:00 PM

I like this, Sara! Love, Kim

Jack Horne

Date: 6/15/2013 11:49:00 AM

lol, clever write, my friend

Colleen Bono

Date: 6/15/2013 9:07:00 AM

I saw the blog this morning.Not sure what happened but I will say prayers for you and famiy.I will ask God to embrace you in his arms and comfort you.Love Colleen

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