Ego Trip

Me,me my forever sigh-
will insecurity die
in an hedonistic cry ?

Inspired by  Will Shakespeare's Threnos form
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 10:08 AM
funny, well done!!
Kendrick Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 9:39 AM
So many people are wrapped up in themselves that there is no way that the people who touch them as family, friends, and co-workers can get any fulfillment out of life...As the saying goes conceit is the only illness that makes everyone sick excep the one who has it..Great topic and presentation of it..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Very thought-provoking, Brian. Our insecurities never seem to die. People who display big egos are often the ones who feel most insecure. Best wishes, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 9:07 AM
Perfection .. words so true.. enjoyed.. with luv..
Mills Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 11:59 PM
I think inspiration found you here in your ego trip poem. Thanks! Susan
Babcock Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 2:58 PM
Enjoyed your write Brian. God Bless Phyl
Nutter Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 8:43 AM
We all have an ego in one form or another. Nice write.
A   Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 8:39 AM
lots of the ego going around lately. Enjoyed your poem Mr.Brian Srand,..LeeAnn
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