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Poetic form: Specular Fugue

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Ego and Wisdom

‘The ego shouts, but wisdom whispers.’ —A Zen philosophy.
The weaver bird screeches without pause in the tree, trying to convince a mate to move in. I slam the window shut on the noise. His ego bruised and in pure disgust, he rips apart the nest that took a whole day to build. Raising one’s voice has never won an argument. A whispering voice draws people in, fragments or whole thoughts shaped by time— wisdom distilled from discarded ego. I open the window to a world misunderstood, gathering the brittle twigs of tolerance, convinced poetry is born in the pauses between spoken words.
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Hind Avatar
February 24, 2026 at 10:52 PM
This is a beautiful concept. Well done!! A lesson to learn :)
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February 20, 2026 at 12:31 AM
Beautiful poem Suzette - rings true on many levels and very skillfully composed. Enjoyed :)
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February 20, 2026 at 1:34 AM
Thank you for reading and your kind comment, Laurentine. :)
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