Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Ego

Ego gets in the way of one's life,                                                                        a big and bold part of us cuts like a knife.                                                                 Ego can cause much pain~strife,                                                                          it can worsen ones life.                                                                                      It needs to be tamed,                                                                                         tamed like a roaring lion~I proclaimed.                                                                  Put it in it's place,                                                                                                  then everyday ask for grace.                                                                               Live life to the fullest embrace,                                                                                 by putting ego in a box or a case.  

 

Date Written 6/29/2022

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Delice Arleen Skelly July 1, 2022 at 4:06 AM Your right ego and trouble go together...Delice Paula Goldsmith July 1, 2022 at 1:05 PM Thanks for your note. Ego and trouble go hand and hand together. Have a blessed day/weekend...................

FJ Thomas June 30, 2022 at 5:59 PM Ego is never a good thing. Great write Paula. Paula Goldsmith July 1, 2022 at 1:04 PM Thanks for your note. So very true, "Ego is never a good thing." Have a blessed day/weekend...................

Len Gasun June 30, 2022 at 9:12 AM A very beautiful and creative write about the topic my dear friend Paula. I love it a lot and I especially like the ending lines. Thanks a lot for sharing. Best wishes and good luck in the contest. God bless you always. Hugs Paula Goldsmith June 30, 2022 at 2:21 PM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you love this Ego write. Ego and trouble go together. Have a blessed day/weekend...................

Sotto Poet June 29, 2022 at 6:59 PM Your poem is beautiful, Paula. The way you let your thoughts roam in this instance was just incredible. Paula Goldsmith June 30, 2022 at 2:19 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you like my Ego write. It sure can get one into trouble. Have a blessed day/weekend...................

Gershon Wolf June 29, 2022 at 6:36 PM You are so right. Ego out of control is a curse. Needs taming! Peace, Gershon Paula Goldsmith June 30, 2022 at 2:18 PM Thanks for your note. Ego and trouble go together. We need to tame it. Have a blessed day/weekend...................

L Milton Hankins June 29, 2022 at 2:19 PM I can certainly agree with everything you wrote, Paula. Ego can get one in real trouble..."it needs to be tamed!" Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest. Paula Goldsmith June 30, 2022 at 10:33 AM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Ego and trouble go together. We need to tame it even when it is hard to do so. Have a blessed day/weekend...................