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Ego

Ego: 

The tip of consciousness' iceberg

That

Likes to take credit 

For 

All that the unseen 9/10 of consciousness 

Is achieving!






© Demetrios Trifiatis
   21 November 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Hello Demetrios, you got the ego described very well. Have a nice evening my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 10:59 AM
How true, the unsung heroes the nine tenths do most of the work. Tom.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Yes, they do the vast amount of work my friend, Tom but Ego being an egoist tries to profit! Thank you very much!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Golden pen! A fave :))) hugs n' love xomo
Trifiatis Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 11:31 AM
How kind of you my dearest fiend, Maureen ! Thank you for your generosity! Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 5:51 AM
- There is power in these lines, well done my friend :) - Is it possible that selfish actions are motivated by a self-image that is incorrect in relation to reality? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Thank you for your gracious comment dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
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