Eglantine

Powerfully building inertia, runs a silver metallic flow of positive thoughts as I sleep
Omni-rivers of mercury heavily weld my mind, repairing lifetimes of weighted hurts once so deep
Shaded, in rose gardens, we lay across cloth Verde
Intensifying our mutual connection just fair play
Time spent with you, no infinite commodity
Inspired by you within it, though, I live vicariously
Visionary dreams, I found happiness no longer eludes me
Eglantine, my mind must be finding its own form of mercury
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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August 13, 2023 at 1:12 PM
Whoah, A.S.!! This has such an original tune to it. I have never heard the word "englantine"- looked it up. Such a surprising poem- I am really inpressed.
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August 13, 2023 at 1:15 PM
I live, love, and enjoy the happiness of life always! I am glad to expose you to a word you did not know :) Look at the first letter of each stanza for more to see ;P Warmly A.S.
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