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Eglantine

Powerfully building inertia, runs a silver metallic flow of positive thoughts as I sleep Omni-rivers of mercury heavily weld my mind, repairing lifetimes of weighted hurts once so deep Shaded, in rose gardens, we lay across cloth Verde Intensifying our mutual connection just fair play Time spent with you, no infinite commodity Inspired by you within it, though, I live vicariously Visionary dreams, I found happiness no longer eludes me Eglantine, my mind must be finding its own form of mercury

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Date: 8/13/2023 1:12:00 PM
Whoah, A.S.!! This has such an original tune to it. I have never heard the word "englantine"- looked it up. Such a surprising poem- I am really inpressed.
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 8/13/2023 1:15:00 PM
I live, love, and enjoy the happiness of life always! I am glad to expose you to a word you did not know :) Look at the first letter of each stanza for more to see ;P Warmly A.S.
Date: 8/13/2023 10:11:00 AM
Nice poem on healing Scorpio
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 8/13/2023 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Tom!

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