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Spiders l totally detest Wrapped in my towel after a shower Imagine my utter horror As a black one of size was walking across my chest Eeeeeewwwwww!!!

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Sotto Poet

Date: 9/16/2023 7:54:00 PM

Your writing is captivating, Deb. Your poem is incredibly powerful. Spiders cause sleepless nights for countless individuals

Deb M
Date: 9/17/2023 9:51:00 AM

Thanks Lasaad…. Debx

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/16/2023 4:38:00 PM

Oh my, Deb. I know how you feel. I do not like spiders or snakes.

Deb M
Date: 9/17/2023 9:51:00 AM

Thanks Jerry…Debx

Terry Flood

Date: 9/16/2023 2:52:00 PM

Yikes… I’m not scared of Mr Octobug but he’s not my favourite critter either. Next time you take a shower, remember 1) shower gel, 2) shampoo, 3) Conditioner, 4) Swat-o-kill ;-) glad you survived

Deb M
Date: 9/17/2023 9:56:00 AM

Gross gross and GROSS it was Terry….could not get rid of the crawly feeling from my chest….and im paranoid now!! Thanks…Debx

Arlo Parker

Date: 9/16/2023 12:20:00 PM

Quite an effective poem, Deb. Spiders keep a lot of people awake. :-/

Deb M
Date: 9/17/2023 9:54:00 AM

Thanks Arlo…Debx

Sally Eslinger

Date: 9/16/2023 9:45:00 AM

Eeeew! Is right! One dark, summer’s night in my teens, trying to fall asleep, I felt a tackle on my chest. I turned on the light & saw the same thing! Eek! I hit my chest til it turned red, but not sure i killed that spider! Wondering how many of us have lived the experience of this poem. It speaks for millions thru the ages,I’m sure! Loved this one, Deb!

Deb M
Date: 9/17/2023 9:54:00 AM

Horrible feeling isn't it Sally and then to look down and see what it is aaahhhhhhh!! Scary stuff! Thankyou….Debx

Jan Allison

Date: 9/16/2023 6:30:00 AM

eeek! ////00\\\\ I detest them too - get hubby to remove them out the window !:-) hugs Jan xx

Deb M
Date: 9/17/2023 9:50:00 AM

They really freak me out Jan! Debx

Lin Lane

Date: 9/16/2023 5:57:00 AM

You had good reason to be paranoid. Shake out your towels before you use them, Deb. This would make a good Halloween story. Sorry you had such a scare.

Deb M
Date: 9/17/2023 9:50:00 AM

Paranoid and shaking Sister!!! Haha…..Debx

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/16/2023 5:38:00 AM

OMG Deb, at the thought of one on the towel, I was done!!! I'd be right back in that shower!!! Happy Saturday xxoo

Deb M
Date: 9/16/2023 5:51:00 AM

Not on the towel Mike….on my skin on my chest!!! I was so grossed out….l could feel that feeling of it on me all day…it was awful….now im paranoid!!! Thanks…Debx