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Education


education
              an equation
    wrapped up
                  in    
    explanation
                  and
                      instruction
      drifting lexis
                    to grow
                personally
          professionally
    socially
 and
    develop
          desire
               to solve
       problems
  while trying 
     to cling 
          onto
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Date: 11/21/2023 2:57:00 AM
What a creative and profound take on education this is dear sotto, i agree everything in life even education hangs in an equation. And i can resonate and think of how i felt too , wrapped up in solving and finding answers. Absolutely stunning word choices and alliterations and flow to your lines too. I love unspooling mind. Thats unique and brilliant! Congratulations on your win. Well deserved as always. A fave for me this is
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Date: 11/20/2023 7:50:00 AM
What is left when the final thread comes off the spool? I think writing poetry helps put it back together. I send my best wishes.
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Date: 11/20/2023 6:58:00 AM
Wow! Love this! Fave!
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Date: 11/20/2023 6:24:00 AM
Hello Sotto, Wow your poem is unique and well written. It reminds me of ee cummings works. Great Piece on Education! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 11/20/2023 6:11:00 AM
Awesome concrete form and poetic description of the education process upon a young mind
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